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Mobile Phone and Driving! Texting or Talking while driving is banned in my country. However, it is easy to see quite a range number of people who are using cellphones while they're driving on the streets. According to statistics, a thousand of accidents were happened as a consequence of using cellphones while they're driving. All of the major were published and I suppose almost all these drivers can assess the news, but It seems these bad news do not help them to realize how dangerous of their actions are. In this morning, I saw a man who were driving carelessly and I guessed he had to be using his cellphone. Unfortunately, my guessing was true when I saw he was driving by one hand while the other was holding his phone. I don't know why the police don't stop and fine them. Please correct me!

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Mobile Phones and Driving!
Texting or talking while driving is banned in my country. However, it is easy to see quite a number of people who are using cellphones while they're driving on the streets (you could leave out “on the streets”). According to statistics, a thousand accidents happened as a consequence of using cellphones while driving. All of the major (major what? news stories?) were published, and I suppose almost all of these drivers can assess the news, but it seems the bad news does not help them to realize how dangerous their actions are. This morning, I saw a man who was (“were” would be if it was multiple people or subjects. He/she/it was … they were) driving carelessly and I assumed (a better word to use) he had to be using his cellphone. Unfortunately, my assumption (again, a better word. But you could say “Unfortunately, my guess was true…”) was true when I saw he was driving with one hand while the other was holding his phone. I don't know why the police don't stop and fine them. Please correct me!

We have the same problem where I live too. Too many people text and drive. It causes unnecessary accidents everyday. Anyways, great post!

 

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