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In a cold spring day In february I will travel to Netherlands for studying but that decision is really hard. I have three dogs, and I love them a lot but is not possible take them there because is expensive and is almost impossible find housing. Here my family will care them, and I´m pretty sure they will be fine, but I will mess them a lot. One of them, Suyay came with me to Valdivia five years ago, she had only one year when we started our life here and now she is a southern dog, who sleep below the rain and run through the forest. She has almost six years and when I will see her again she will have almost ten years. I will care of her when she will be a oldest dog, and love her infinitely.

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In On a cold spring day

In February I will travel to the Netherlands for studying my studies but that decision is really hard. I have three dogs, and I love them a lot but it is not possible to take them there because it is expensive and it is almost impossible find housing. Here my family will take care of them, and I´m I'm pretty sure they will be fine, but I will mess miss them a lot. One of them, Suyay, came with me to Valdivia five years ago, she had only one year she was only one when we started our life here and now she is a southern dog, who sleeps below under the rain and runs through the forest. She has almost six years is almost six years old and when I will see her again she will have be almost ten years old. I will take care of her when she's an older dog will be a oldest dog, and love her infinitely.

1. Remember that in English, you always need a pronoun. "Is" can never stand on its own, even though in Spanish it is always on its own. Where you say "Because is expensive," you always have to put "it" there: "Because it's expensive"

2. Age is never expressed with the verb "to have." Although you say "Tengo 16 años" in Spanish, you must say "I am 16" or "I am 16 years old" in English.

3. "Cuidar" in English is a phrasal verb and is "to take care of," not "to care," which has an entirely different meaning.

I hope this helps! Good luck.

 

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