My last week
Last week was a great week for me, because 5th november, last wednesday, was my birthday! I waked up in my birthday and my husband was prepared a delicious breakfast for me, with cake, fruits, bread, cereal... In the afternoon, I went to my work in the college. There, the students were preparing a surprise for me. During my class, they "invaded" my classroom singing "happy birthday to you" with a luscious chocolate cake and balloons!
In the night, I went to a french restaurant called "Au bon vivant", in the centre of Belo Horizonte. There, I ate a delicious steak with herbs and potatoes.
To finish my birthday's celebrations, I traveled to Rio de Janeiro on saturday to celebrate with my mother, my mother in law and my father in law. Saturday' night, I celebrate with my friends. It was a fantastic birthday! But, now, I need to do a diet.
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My last week
Last week was a great week for me, because on the 5th november, last Wednesday, it was my birthday! I woke up on the day of my birthday and my husband had prepared a delicious breakfast for me, with cake, fruits, bread, cereal... In the afternoon, I went to work at the university. There, the students were preparing a surprise for me. During my class, they "invaded" my classroom singing "happy birthday to you" with a luscious chocolate cake and balloons!
At night, I went to a French restaurant called "Au bon vivant", in the centre of Belo Horizonte. There, I ate a delicious steak with herbs and potatoes.
To finish my birthday's celebrations, I traveled to Rio de Janeiro on Saturday to celebrate it with my mother, my mother-in-law and my father-in-law. On Saturday night, I celebrated with my friends. It was a fantastic birthday! But, now, I need to go on a diet.
Hi Ana Paula, that's wonderful; I'm very happy for you!!! :)
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My last week
Last week was a great week for me, because the 5th of November, last Wednesday, was my birthday! I woke waked up on in my birthday and my husband had was prepared a delicious breakfast for me, with cake, fruits, bread, and cereal. In the afternoon, I went to my work (job) at in the college. There, the students were preparing (had prepared) a surprise for me. During my class, they "invaded" my classroom singing "happy birthday to you" with a luscious chocolate cake and balloons!
That In the night, I went to a French restaurant called "Au bon vivant", in the centre of Belo Horizonte. There, I ate a delicious steak with herbs and potatoes.
To finish my birthday's celebrations, I traveled to Rio de Janeiro on Saturday to celebrate with my mother, my mother-in-law and my father-in-law. Saturday night, I celebrated with my friends. It was a fantastic birthday! But, now, I need to go on do a diet.
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Thanks, Matthew!
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Hi Ana! David's corrections (below) are spot on. There's just one thing I would change. "Birthday's celebrations." We would probably say: "Birthday celebrations." We don't usually talk about our birthdays owning something. Hope that helps! :-)
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