I'm Moved...
I'm moved by little simple things and every time they found their way to me, they touched my heart deep,
I'm filled with emotions when I saw a child holding his mother or chose the grocery cart as suitable place to sleep,
I'm mesmerized by the last hot sunrise in summer and by autumn's first chill winds and falling leaves,
I'm stunned by how many times I wanted to do something but I delayed because I wanted to start in the coming years,
I'm impressed by angels that helped in silence and refused to be thanked as if their only purpose was to help others heal,
I'm tortured by a broken look on a homeless face & ashamed if ever I ate while he couldn't have a decent meal,
I'm overwhelmed by how my voice trembled when I recalled what I thought I forgot but it still made my heart beats,
I'm surprised by strong emotions and sudden encouragement that I felt even after I experienced so many defeats,
I'm amazed of how lovely Lavenders smelled in spring and by the beauty of my hometown's old Oak trees,
I'm fascinated by wild pigeons that chose to stay on my window even when I offered them nothing to eat,
I'm charmed by those that were in love with love itself and dealt with it as a way to move on and never retreat,
I'm moved by those that believed in miracles, yet sadly they were confused and got stuck in the middle like you and me…
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I am Moved...
I am moved by little things and every time they find their way to me, they touch my heart deeply,
I am filled with emotions when I see a child being held by his mother or choosing the grocery cart as suitable place to sleep,
I am mesmerized by the last hot sunrise in summer and by autumn's first chilly winds and falling leaves,
I am stunned by how many times I wanted to do something but delayed because I wanted to start in the coming years,
I am impressed by angels that help in silence and refused to be thanked as if their only purpose was to help others heal,
I am tortured by a broken look on a homeless' face & ashamed if ever I ate while he couldn't have a decent meal,
I am overwhelmed by how my voice trembled when I recalled what I thought I had forgotten but still made my heart beat,
I am surprised by strong emotions and the sudden encouragement that I felt even after I experienced so many defeats,
I am amazed by how lovely lavender smells in spring and by the beauty of my hometown's old oak trees,
I'm fascinated by wild pigeons that chose to stay on my window even when I offered them nothing to eat,
I am charmed by those that were in love with love itself and dealt with it as a way to move on and never retreat,
I am moved by those who believed in miracles, but were sadly confused and stuck in the middle like you and me…
Note: I changed all the "I'm" to "I am" to suit the tone of your poem. "I am" as opposed to "I'm" has a more stronger and resolute feeling to it. I hope you find my corrections helpful! :)
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Me too! But in Jordan they are every where in Spring, specially in my hometown with daisies and many other kinds of wild flowers:) And it's ok here if you pick some, this is the only free thing in my homeland, better than nothing;) Cinnamon is only good when baked with cinnamon rolls;))) And I agree it doesn't smell that good when mixed with lavender.
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I don't have access to my own source of flowers for drying, so I often have to buy a pot pourri mix from the natural health store, but I'm never really happy with the combinations they provide. I like lavender and rose, but they often add cinnamon as well and I don't like it as much.
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Yes, Andi this is the best smell ever, I know what you mean,, nothing beats the beauty of nature:) I dry lavender flowers and keep them in my room always (,")
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I absolutely love the smell of lavender. And the Earth after the first rain of summer.
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