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[The thesis “Solutions to enhance the export of Vietnam seafood to the EU market” for the purposes of specifying the advantages and the disadvantages of Vietnam seafood when exporting to the EU market in other to supply the solutions to reinforce the export of seafood to the EU market more stable in the future.
To achieve these purposes, the thesis analysises the statement of the export of Vietnam seafood to the EU market in recent years. Simultaneously, the thesis likewise analysises the advantages and the disadvantages in exporting to this market, analysis the strengths, the weakness, the opportunities, the threats and the competitive advantages of this industry, as the basis to propose solutions.
The thesis uses the five competitive forces and the diamond model of Michael E.Porter to analysis the pressures of seafood export to the EU. Besides, the thesis likewise analysises the competitive advantages comprising demand conditions, related and supporting industries, factor condition, the government’s policies and firm structure and rivalry.
Finally, the thesis uses SWOT matrix, the matrix of strengths, weaknesses, opportunities and threats to form the most feasible strategies for the export of Vietnam seafood to the EU market. Via the matrix and the analyses, the thesis proposes the solution relating to market penetration and market development, product diversification, the planning and guarantee of material resources, competitive advantages-based material resource development and ultimately marketing and product branding of Vietnam seafood]
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