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A good beginnning makes a good end An old Chinese famous saying told us:"everything's beginning is the most hard one ."Indeed,if we can break the hindrance and make a good beginning that shows a big huge step we achieve. When we set up to do something,we need to do it step by step,every step influenced the next step and connected with the previous step,that means if we bulit a wonderful basis that makes the next things stronger and convinient.On the other hand,a good beginning do motive our ambition and confidence,which are the most vital mental factors of ourselves. Another famous saying is "A good beginning is the half success".However,adherence is the other half way for a good end.Supposing we have made a wonderful beginning,whta will happen if we don't cherish and perserve,the only one consequence could be failure instead of happy ending.In a word,we can not just fovus on one aspect but ignore the other aspect,a good beginning plus adherence is the only way to make a good end.

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A good beginnning makes a good end

An old Chinese famous saying tells us:"any beginning is the most hardest one ."Indeed,if we can break the hindrance and make a good beginning that shows a big huge step we have achieve.
When we set up to do something,we need to do it step by step,every step influences the next step and is connected with the previous step,that means if we built a wonderful basis that makes the next things stronger and convinient.On the other hand,a good beginning does motive our ambition and confidence,which are the most vital mental factors of ourselves.
Another famous saying is "A good beginning is the half success".However,adherence is the other half way for a good end.Supposing we have made a wonderful beginning,what will happen if we don't cherish and preserve it ,the only one consequence could be failure instead of a happy ending.In a word,we can not just focus on one aspect but ignore the other aspect,a good beginning plus adherence is the only way to make a good end.

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A good beginnning makes a good end

An old Chinese famous A famous old Chinese saying told tells [1] us: "everything's beginning is the most hard hardest one ."  Indeed, if we can break the hindrance [2] and make a good beginning that shows a big huge step we can achieve.
When we set up to do something, we need to do it step by step,. Every step influenceds the next step and is connected with the previous step,.  That means if we bulit build a wonderful basis that makes the next things stronger and more convenient.  On the other hand, a good beginning do will motive increase our ambition and confidence, which are the most vital mental factors of ourselves.
Another famous saying is,  "A good beginning is the half the success".  However, adherence perseverance is the other half way for a good end.  Supposing we have made a wonderful beginning, whta what will happen if we don't cherish and perserve persevere?  The only one consequence could be failure instead of a happy ending.  In a word [3], we can not just focus on one aspect but and ignore the other aspect,.  A good beginning plus adherence is the only way to make achieve a good end.

 

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[1] The word 'told' is past tense.  It refers to something which was said in the past.

"Ten years ago my father told me a story."

The word 'tells' may refer to something that has been said in the past, yet continues to be said.

"Every Chinese New Year my father tells me a story."

[2] It would be much better to write, "If we can overcome our hesitation."

[3] If you start a sentence with "In a word," you should then use a single word.  For example:

"In a word, failure."

If your sentence requires more than a single word, you can start with "In other words."  For example:

"In other words, a lack of perseverance may result in failure."

 

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Please add a space (' ') after every comma (',') and full stop ('.').

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A good beginnning makes a good end

An old Chinese famous saying told us:"everything's beginning is the most hard one ."Indeed,if we can break the hindrance and make a good beginning that shows a big huge step we achieve.
When we set up to do something,we need to do it step by step,every step influenced the next step and connected with the previous step,that means if we bulit a wonderful basis that makes the next things stronger and convinient.On the other hand,a good beginning do motive our ambition and confidence,which are the most vital mental factors of ourselves.
Another famous saying is "A good beginning is the half success".However,adherence is the other half way for a good end.Supposing we have made a wonderful beginning,what will happen if we don't cherish and perserve,the only one consequence could be failure instead of happy ending.In a word,we can not just focus on one aspect but ignore the other aspect,a good beginning plus adherence is the only way to make a good end.

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