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Living in the brazilian wonderful city Well, it is said that Brazilian cities are full of joy, grace and beauty, but more than that, Brazilian cities have life, movement on itself. A good and ordinary comparison is that Brazil is like a giant human body (not only for its territory, but also for its enormous variety of people and different cultures), composed by many different organs and branches that makes it all work as it should, properly. As for me, in my humble opinion, in this wide body, my city, Rio de Janeiro, is the heart, where all the passion and joy come together and rise into our people's heart, being reflected in people's behavior, cause the way we take life is regular, and not simply regular, but extraordinary regular. In every corner of the city you, as tourist, can find someone, even if he/she doesn't get what you're saying, willing to cooperate with you and help you to reach what you're looking for. And that's not for stealing and bad purposes (as it may sound abroad), but because it's an inner sense we grow up with. Now, can you picture a place, rounded by gorgeous beaches and lakes, amazing waterfalls, untouched pieces of ancient forests in which you can even hike in, stunning people and all that combined with a historical and economical downtown, providing and guaranteeing the complete balance between the comfort and seriousness that only a city like ours can offer? There's also plenty of cultural things to do, like theaters, movie theaters, art museums, and so on, all that with the best quality. Every year, this town is destiny of thousands and thousands of tourists from all over the globe, and the larger is the amount of people that come, the larger is the amount of people that fall in love and cry and it's time to go. People from all corners, with different colors, different languages, different cultures, different tastes, but all of them are still human beings, above all, and still have flesh and bones, and a heart. (Wait, a heart?, wasn't it what my whole text is about? the heart of Brazil and bla.........) And you? Have you ever come here, not even passed by? If you just mentally answered no twice, what's your problem? (No, just kidding!) But if you said no, what are you waiting for? Greetings, from Rio ;)

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Wow, great writing for a non native English speaker. Well done! Also, I would love to visit Rio, it seems an amazing place!
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Living in the Wonderful City of Rio de Janeiro, Brazil

 

It is said that Brazilian cities are full of joy, grace, and beauty. More than those qualities, Brazilian cities are full of life, as well they are a movement of they own. A good comparison is that Brazil is like a giant human body (not only for its territory, but also for its enormous variety of people and different cultures), composed by many different organs and branches that makes everything work as it should, properly. 

 

As for me, in my humble opinion, in this "big body", my city, Rio de Janeiro, is the heart. This is where all the passion and joy come together. From the hearts of Brazilians, our behavior is reflected in the in the way we live our lives; and not simple or regular, but extraordinary. In every corner of the city, you, as tourist, can find someone (even if he/she doesn't understand what you're saying) willing to cooperate with you and help you to find what you're looking for. We don't help people because we want to steal, or have some sort of bad intention, but because it's an inner quality we grow up with. It is something our parents and our culture teach us.

 
Now...picture this: A city surrrounded by gorgeous beaches and lakes, amazing waterfalls, untouched pieces of ancient forests for you to go hiking in, and stunning and friendly people. Now, combine that with a historical and modern downtown with a thriving economy. It a balance between the comfort and seriousness that only a city like ours can offer. Also, there are also plenty of cultural things to do, like theaters, cinemas, and art museums; and all this at the highest quality.


Every year this town is destiny of thousands upon thousands of tourists from all over the globe, and every year the amount of people that come is larger. Every year, more people come to our great city and fall in love and cry when they it's time to go for them to return to their home countries. People from all corners of the world. They come from different colors, different languages, different cultures, different tastes, but above all, they are all human beings, and have flesh and bones, and a heart like you and me. (Wait, a heart?, wasn't it what my whole text is about? the heart of Brazil?)


And you? Have you ever visited my beautiful country? If you just mentally answered no twice, what's your problem? (No, just kidding!) But if you said no, what are you waiting for?

Warmest regards from Rio... ;)

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Living in wonderful Brazilian cities

 

Well, it is said that Brazilian cities are full of joy, grace and beauty, but more than that, Brazilian cities have life and movement in itself. A good and ordinary comparison is that Brazil is like a giant human body (not only for its territory, but also for its enormous variety of people and different (not necessary) cultures), composed of many different organs and branches that makes it all work as it should/properly (don't need both, pick one).


As for me, in my humble opinion, in this wide body, my city, Rio de Janeiro, is the heart, where all the passion and joy comes together and rises into our people's hearts. It is reflected in people's behavior, because the way we take life is regular, and not simply regular, but extraordinary regular (not quite sure what you are trying to say here, but this part of the sentence doesn't quite make sense).

 

In every corner of the city you, as a tourist, can find someone, even if he/she doesn't get what you're saying, willing to cooperate with you and help you to reach what you're looking for. And that's not to steal or for bad purposes (as it may sound abroad), but because it's an inner sense we grow up with. 

 

Now, can you picture a place, surrounded by gorgeous beaches and lakes, amazing waterfalls, untouched pieces of ancient forests in which you can even hike in and stunning people. All that combined with a historical and economical downtown, providing and guaranteeing the complete balance between the comfort and seriousness that only a city like ours can offer? There's also plenty of cultural things to do, like going to the theaters, movie theaters, art galleries, and so on, all of the the best quality.


Every year, this town is the destiny of thousands and thousands of tourists from all over the globe, and the larger is the amount of people that come, the larger is the amount of people that fall in love and cry when it's time to go. People from all corners of the world/globe, with different colors, different languages, different cultures and different tastes, but all of them are still human beings. Above all, and still have flesh and bones, and a heart. (Wait, a heart?, isn't that what my whole text is about? The heart of Brazil and bla.........)


And you? Have you ever come here? Not even passed by? If you just mentally answered no twice, what's your problem? (No, just kidding!) But if you said no, what are you waiting for?

Greetings, from Rio ;)

 

Movie theaters in the UK are called "cinemas"

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This entry was very informative, I really wanna go to Brazil one day. Hopefully I'll get that chance. Yeah like you said, almost everyone feels like it has so much energy. It seems awesome.
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Yes, in Rio, for instance, there are some unfriendly places away from downtown. But you need to plan your route and know exactly where you're going to stay before leaving home. Moreover, when it comes to sightseeing points in town, you don't run on any imminent risk. Take care.

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