A family celebration

A recent family celebration that I have attended was celebrating the birthday of my grandfather. Many people from my family attended came, from my aunts, uncles, cousins to distant relatives. It was a huge celebration so I helped my mom and dad to greet the guests. I also talked a lot with my grandfather and he shared his life experiences with me, which deeply touched me.
After the celebration, I felt that we really enjoyed the company with of our family. We enjoyed talking to our relatives and we can take pleasures from these occasions coz becasue we’ll have a sense of belonging.
I think that we should spend more time with our family, especially with the old people. Actually, today we spend less time with our families than be before.
We trend tend to lead a busy life lives and we are occupied with heavy workloads. That’s why we hardly spend quality time with other members in the our family.
Another reason is that we hardly pay attention to traditional family values. Some More people trend tend to live in large cities where they purse pursue targets other things, so they do not visit their family frequently.
In my opinion, family celebrations and other kinds of family gatherings are good chances opportunities for promoting the relationships between family members.

*I also agree with this! Family is very important. Keep up the great writing*