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You are not alone Hi guys, today it's very cold and maybe it will be raining. I'm a little sad because I'm alone at home and sometimes i think about my life and i hope i will become free.. I live with my parents but i think they don't understand me and what i want.. They want a perfect daughter, but I'm not perfect .. I want travel, i want see new places, meet a lot of people in my future... They want i will marry, they want i will have children in the future .. But in this moment i want only to be free! And live this life how i really want!

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You Are Not Alone

 

Hi guys,

 

Today it's very cold and maybe it will be raining it looks like it might rain. I'm a little sad because I'm alone at home and sometimes I think thinking about my life. and I hope i will become free that someday I will be free.

 

I live with my parents but I think they don't think they understand me and or what I want. They want a perfect daughter, but I'm not perfect. I want to travel, I want see new places, I want to meet a lot of people in my future. They want i will me to marry, they want i will me to have children in the future. But in this moment I want only want to be free! and live this my life how i the way I really want!

 

Hey! Just so you know, we always capitalize the prounoun "I." Always! :-)

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You are not alone

Hi guys, today it's very cold and maybe it will be raining rain (and it might rain sounds better). I'm a little sad because I'm alone at home and sometimes i think about my life and i hope i will become free.. I live with my parents but i think they don't understand me and what i want.. They want a perfect daughter, but I'm not perfect .. I want to travel, i want see new places and meet a lot of people in my future... They want i will me to marry, they want i will me to have children in the future .. But in at this moment i want only only want to be free! And live this life how i really want!

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