Good moring everyone, my name is **. I'm 24 years old and come frome **, I was graduated from Communication university of **. I have some interests, for example  I love to play the piano, sometimes I'm singing song and I like drawing. When I was a child, I dreamed that one day I can fly in the sky like the birds (or like a bird). Now I have a chance to make my dreams come true. If I can take this job, I'll do my best to do be everything (great - sounds more decisively) well. Because I love this job. Thanks to the judges (or you can say - I would like to say thank you to the judges).

self-introduction (I hope you can help me modify Thank you very much! ^_^)

Good moring everyone,my name is **,I'm 24 years old ,and I frome from**,I graduated from Communication University of **.I have some interests,for example: such as playing piano,singsong singing and drawing~.When I was a child,I dreamed that one day ,I can fly in the sky like the a bird. Now I have the a chance to make it come true.If I can take get this job, I'll try my best to do everthing well because I love this kind of job.Thanks to the judges.