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Message example Hi everyone! Could you please correct the following example of a message? I ask you also if you can suggest me some expressions which are better than the expressions I used. Thank you. ---- I would prefer to postpone our meeting to the next week. Could you please schedule the new meeting considering when the documents will be ready ? My colleague told me to ask you if you could send us a preview of the document. In fact we received a part of the document, but we would like to give a look also to the other parts to have an idea of the month trend. Thank you. ----

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Message example

Hi everyone! Could you please correct the following example of a message?
I also ask you if you could suggest me some expressions which are better than the expressions I used.
Thank you.
----
I would prefer to postpone our meeting until next week.
Could you please schedule the new meeting considering when the documents will be ready ?
My colleague told me to ask you if you could send us a preview of the document. In fact, we received a part of the document, but we would also like to take a look at the other parts to get an idea of the monthly trends.
Thank you.
----

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Message example

Hi everyone! Could you please correct the following example of a message?
I ask you also if you can suggest me some expressions which are better than the expressions I used.
Thank you.
----
I would prefer to postpone our meeting until next week.
Could you please reschedule the new meeting considering when the for a time when all the  documents are ready?
My colleague told me to ask you if you could send us a preview of the documents. We received part of the document, but we would also like to look at the rest of the document so we can have a better idea of the monthly trend.
Thank you.
----

 

Spero che questo va bene! Non sono sicuro se il documento e' solo per un mese o per piu'. "il monthly trend" e' singolare, "monthly trends" e' plurare

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Message example

Hi everyone! Could you please correct the following example of a message?
I ask you also if you can suggest me some expressions which are better than the expressions I used.
Thank you.
----
I would prefer to postpone our meeting to the next week.
Could you please schedule the new meeting considering when the documents will be ready ?
My colleague told me to ask you if you could send us a preview of the document. In fact we received a part of the document, but we would like to give a look also to the other parts to have an idea of the month trend.
Thank you.
----

I am not sure what you mean by

COULD YOU PLEASE POSTPONE THE NEW MEETING CONSIDERING WHEN THE DOCUMENTS WILL BE READY.

 

Are you talking about  POSTPONING the meeting where we will discuss when the docs will be ready?  or do you mean  COULD YOU PLEASE POSTPONE THE MEETING UNTIL THE DOCS SRE READY.

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