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My dear diary
A new day is has arrived. I still do every things as one used to do formerly. There always are so many lessons we have to take ,and the teachers always make too much noise like machines.I even do not care for the infomations about her talking.I am just thinking what we are going to play and how can I get away from here.
Which program is more interesting ,playing MAJIANG or computer game ?That is what I think now.Why is there no some interesting things happening to me.I just want my life to become more wonderful and better.
- Not bad.The stuff I highlighted in yellow...the sentence sounds awkard. Keep practicing man. Really not bad at all.
My dear diary
A new day is arrived.I still do every things as one used to do formerly.There always are so many lessons we have to take ,and the teachers always make too much noise like machines.I even do not care for the imfomations about her talking.I am just thinking what we are going to play and how can I get away from here.
Which program is more interested ,playing MAJIANG or computer game ?That is what I think now.Why there are not some interesting things happened to me.I just wanna my life become more wonderful and better.
You wrote very well, but there are some places that are a little awkward. I wrote it again in a more natural sounding way, hopefully it can help you.
Today is a new day, but everything is still the same as usual. We have too many classes, and the teachers just ramble on and on like machines. I don't even care what she is saying, I just think about what I am going to do after class and how I can get away from here. Right now I'm wondering if it would be more fun to play Majiang or computer games. Why doesn't anything interesting ever happen to me? I just want my life to be more exciting.
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