practice makes perfect

As the old saying goes practice makes perfect. It is obviously true that the practice plays an important part in the perfect work/perfecting a process/routine - among the other factors like concentration, determination (don't use 'etc' when you already have said 'like', 'such as' 'including') etc. Firstly, practice provides us the opportunity to find the any deficiency in the working routine procedure. With the realization discovery/unearthing of these weaknesses, we can find out the ways to improve the work performance and complete it with more greater accuracy/precision. Secondly, enough practiceing can enhance our efficiency in the work. The more you repeated a routine/process, the more acquainted/familiar you become with your work, and that leads/allows you to do your work more quickly. There have been is a popular story in since from the Song dynasty of ancient China, about an the old man who had been selling oil for many years, and could pour oil from on high place/ held aloft, through a coin with a hole in a coin, into the center to neck of a gourd container without any oil stick on touching the coin. The and old man ascribed his amazing skill to a lot of practice. With By practising to pouring oil for thousands of times, the old man attained the high quality great skill and accuracy in his job. Considering the other fields, I believe that practice can make the for perfect performance (or simply 'can perfect performance' using 'perfect' as a verb) in other fields as well.

practice makes perfect

As the old saying goes practice makes perfect. It is obviously true that the practice plays an important part in the perfect work attaining perfection among the other factors like concentration, determination, etc. Firstly, practice provides us the opportunity to find the deficiencies in the our working routine procedure. With the realization of these weaknesses, we can find out the ways to improve the our work performance and complete it with more accuracy. Secondly, enough practicing can enhance our efficiency in the work. The more repeated the more acquaintedwith you repeat your work, that lead you do your work more quickly the faster you are able to do your work. Repeating your work also helps you to become more acquainted with it. There have has been a popular story in since the Song dynasty of ancient China, the of an old man who selling sold oil for many years. He could pour oil from a high place through a coin with a hole in the center into a gourd container without any oil sticking on the coin, and old man ascribed his amazing skill to a lot of practice. With By practicing to pouring oil for thousands of times, the old man attained this high quality and accuracy in his job. Considering the other fields, I believe that practice can make the perfect performance in other fields as well.

Wow! Great job, Qingsong! Your vocabulary is really impressive! Keep up the good work! Your practicing is paying off!