My Family

Hi, Long time no see on italki.
Today, I'm going to talk about my family. My father is always a calm and gentle man. He can be kind to his family and any people or anyone else. My mother is such a good at cooking so mach. I think she is one of best cooker cooks in of Japanese women. and then, She is also has a bubbly personality. She has a cheerful smile. I love her smile. In addition to my mother and father, I have two younger brothers. They are, too so kind of to any all people. They always help me when I'm in trouble. I love my sweet family, because I grew up with so such kind people. Of couse, I got was scolded by my parents when I did wrong things something wrong. But I have felt their deep affection, (1) so I want to do, too. Oh, I want to go travel with my family in a while to our deep communication.

(1) NOTE: I am not sure what you mean here. Also the sentence after this one is hard to understand.

Below I reworded your notebook. It is just for you to reference as another way to portray your meaning. I kept it simple, and tried to keep it close to your original writing. I recommend you try to find errors in my version to help you practice, also.

Today I am going to talk about my family. My father is always a calm and gentle man. He is kind to both his family and strangers alike. My mother is one of the best cooks in Japan! She has a cheerful smile that I love so much, with a bubbly personality to match. Of course, when I did something wrong, my parents would scold me. Still, I can feel their deep affection. I also have two younger brothers. Like my father, they are kind to all people. Whenever I am in trouble, they always help me. I love my sweet family.

My Family

Hi there!  Long time, no see on italki.
Today, I'm going to talk about my family. My father is always a calm and gentle man. He's can be kind to his family and any other people. My mother is good at cooking so mach. I think she is one of best cookser in Japanese women. and then, She is has a bubbly personality. She has a cheerful smile. I love her smile. In addition, I have two younger brothers. They are, too so also kind of any people. They always help me when I'm in trouble. I love my sweet family because I grew up with so such kind people. Of course, I used to get got scolded by my parents when I did something wrong things. But I have felt their deep affection, so I want to do, too give that affection back to them. oh, I also want to go travel with my family in a while to our deepen  our communication.