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Third note, the beautiful pets...
I like so much the pets so much. I have two dogs. itTheir names are Dona and Canela, they're (is it a correct if I use they're? to refer me my pets? (Yes, they are or they're is correct) :)) a beautifull beautiful pets. I love them like as if it they were persons because they're very intelligent, affectionate (can I use l oving? is better than affectionate? (I think "loving" and "affectionate" are both good)) they have a tender look, they're very lovely and cute.
that's why I feel angry and sad when I look see so much cruelty toward with this beautiful animals
Finally I think all people should to respect to the animals because they're they just give us love us.
thanks for read!!
she's Dona one my pets
(she is very cute!)
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