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who can help me fix my college task? even though it is a little long. thank you so much! Introduction(why): this is my birthday planning for my next birthday, my birthday is August 25th , but that day is Chinese ghost festival like as Halloween in America. At that day I will be in my country –China because of summer vacation. I want to plan a unique and significant birthday event to record the best time in youth. Now I would like to write something about how to plan for it. Venue: I want to hold my birthday party on a beach-- beach. Because my city is a beautiful seaside city, we can find a beautiful place easily as a venue and beach is free. Otherwise, we need to consider about the cost, so the place can save me a part of money. Dress code: every body can wear bikini or other strange clothes because that day is Chinese Halloween. They can make up to be witch or vampire. It ‘s up to my guest. The budget: all of budget can be approximately 3283 Yuan. It equals to 537 dollars. Because some guests don’t know what kind of birthday gift I will like, they will just send me money as my gifts in to a red packet, so I think this is a good way to take a little budget back. Decoration: First, I will put a glass vase, including some flowers on every table. Second, Some words “welcome to my birthday party“ will be printed on a long banner, then, it hangs between 2 coconut trees at party entrance. I will put a table which has some Sign- in notes for my guest under the banner. Third, I use mix- color ribbon, letter balloons, and mix-color balloons to hang these coconut trees around my party area. Last, I will set up and decorate the mini stage,some LED flash pumpkin lamps are hung up in the trees and stage because I want to add some festival element.

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This is my birthday planning for my next birthday,. My birthday is August 25th, but that day which is also the day of the Chinese Ghost Festival, like as similar to Halloween in America. At On that day I will be in my country, China, because of for summer vacation. I want to plan a unique and significant birthday event to record the best time in my youth. (1) Now I would like to write something about how to plan for it.

 

(1) This information is superfluous.

 

Venue:
I want to hold my birthday party on a the beach-- beach. Because My city hometown is a beautiful seaside city, so I we can easily find a beautiful location. place easily as a venue and beach is free. However, if I can't find somewhere on the beach, which is free, I will Otherwise, we need to consider about the cost, so that I the place can save me a part of some money.

 

Dress code:
every body Everybody can wear a bikini, or other strange clothes, because that day is the day of the Chinese Halloween Ghost Festival. They can wear make up to be a witch or vampire. It‘s up to my guest.

 

The budget:
all of budget The budget, at most, can will be approximately 3283 Yuan. It equals equates to 537 dollars. Because some guests don’t know what kind of birthday gift I will would like, they will just send me money as my gifts in to a red packet.so Which I think this is a good way to take a little budget back. save some money.


Decoration:
(2) First, I will put a glass vase, including some filled with flowers on every table. Second, some the words “welcome to my birthday party“ will be printed on a long banner, then, which will it hangs between 2 coconut trees at the party entrance. (3) I will put a table which has some a sign-in notes sheet for my guest, under the banner. (4) Third, I will use mix- color ribbon ribbons of different colors, letter balloons, and mix-color multicolored balloons to hang these on the coconut trees around my party area. Lastly, I will set up and decorate the mini stage with some flashing LED flash pumpkin lamps, which are to be hung up in the trees and around the stage. because That way I want can to add some festival elements.

 

(2) First, I will put flowers in glass vases which will be on every table.

(3) I will put a table under the banner which will have a sign-in sheet for my guests.

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(4) NOTE: It is unclear what you mean. "mix-color ribbons".

If you mean: There will be ribbons, but not all the same color: "I will use ribbons of different colors"

E.G. This ribbon is blue, that ribbon is red, etc. etc.

If you mean: There will be ribbons, each one with multiple colors: "I will use multicolored ribbons"

E.G. This ribbon has blue, green and orange on a single ribbon.

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