"Work Hard, Play Hard"

Two month ago, I came to Shanghai, where is my dream city place. I am a collage student learning in Hangzhou and this year I am writing have to handle my graduation thesis so I have to make a round-trip between Shanghai and Hangzhou. My company is a foreign advertising company,cause and I need to understand English very well.This makes me crazy. But this life they tell me just enjoy your life and work hard, play hard. Would you like to teach me english? 我也可以教你中文哦~~~ Thank you！

This is very good! I know what you were saying before I made corrections. Have a good day.

这是很不错的！我知道你在说之前，我做了更正。祝你有美好的一天。

HARD WORK ,HARD PLAY Hard Work, Hard Play

Two months ago, I came to Shanghai, where is my dream place. I am a collage student studying learn in Hangzhou and this year I have to handle tackle my graduation thesis. So I have to make a round trip between Shanghai and Hangzhou. My company is a foreign advertising company, that's the reason cause I need to improve my English very well.This makes me crazy. But this life tell I tell myself to me just enjoy your life and hard work hard,  hard play hard. Would you like to teach me English?我也可以教你中文哦~~~ Thank you！