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My Project
I have a project on my mind but I don´t know how do it yet. I want create use a Youtube channel to for educate. I am thinking of making entertaining history videos then that connecting those with others subjects and teach principles. I enjoy when learning new things and I believe that this project will help me to learn so too much. I have decided start as soon as I can and, with the practice, will resolve my dubts (consider "overcome my doubts"). The first video will be about the importance of helping others but I won´t talk about this theme. The theme can be, for example "Why did the war start in Iraq started the Iraq war?" and I will connect this with my objective of helping other important issues importance. I can teach other things such as how the review capacity or where to search information. I want enjoy this experience and explore other education systems ways through based on games, videos or news softwares.
Very good! I understood what was written before I corrected anything. Good luck with your Youtube channel, I am sure you will learn a lot!
My project
I have a project on my mind but I don´t know how to carry it out yet. I want to use a YouTube channel to educate others. I am thinking of making entertaining history videos which are connected it with others subjects and also to teach principles. I enjoy it when I learn new things and I believe that this project will help me to learn a lot / a great deal. I decided to start it as soon as I can and, with the practice, to resolve my doubts (or "overcome obstacles?"). The first video will be about the importance of helping others importance but I won´t talk about this theme. The theme could be, for example: Why did started the Iraq war start? and I will then connect this with my objective of helping other importance? ("the importance of helping others?"). I can teach other things such as how to review capacity? or where to search for information. I want to enjoy this experience and explore other educational ideas based on games, videos or news software.
Sounds interesting. Good luck with your project. Some points:
- study the grammar about how to connect two related verbs e.g. I started to write, I like walking
- "helping other importance" does not have a clear meaning. You need to express this in other ways.
- "review capacity" is a phrase which could be used in context but there is no context here to help us understand. You need to "review the capacity of something".
- "teach principles" is not too clear. Try to express this differently. Michael
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