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I need some love poems

As it said in title
I need some love poems or love words
thank you

 

(you didn't say 'English'!)

 

Is the form of the original poem important in translating?
Mostly 7 characters per line, a couplet to start and finish, and three quatrains. There are three repetitions of phrases, and a rhyming pattern in one couplet and two stanzas: A-A, A-A-B-B, A-A-B-B, but the rhyming is not consistent. Chinese doesn't have the iambic rhythms of English.

天上飘着些微云,
地上吹着些微风。
啊!
微风吹动了我的头发,
教我如何不想她?
月光恋爱着海洋,
海洋恋爱着月光。
啊!
这般蜜也似的银夜。
教我如何不想她?
水面落花慢慢流,
水底鱼儿慢慢游。
啊!
燕子你说些话?
教我如何不想她?
枯树在冷风里摇,
野火在暮色中烧。
啊!
西天还有些儿残霞,
教我如何不想她?

Liu Bannong (1891—1934), who was originally named Liu Shoupeng, and also Liu Fu, was a native of Jiangyin County, Jiangsu Province. I see he was credited with having coined the Chinese feminine pronoun 'ta' (她),

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I need some love poems

As it said in title
I need some love poems or love words
thank you

From the Shakespeare Sonnets - 450 years ago

 

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day? (Sonnet 18)

 

Shall I compare thee to a summer’s day?
Thou art more lovely and more temperate.
Rough winds do shake the darling buds of May,
And summer’s lease hath all too short a date.
Sometime too hot the eye of heaven shines,
And often is his gold complexion dimmed;
And every fair from fair sometime declines,
By chance, or nature’s changing course, untrimmed;
But thy eternal summer shall not fade,
Nor lose possession of that fair thou ow’st,
Nor shall death brag thou wand’rest in his shade,
When in eternal lines to Time thou grow’st.
So long as men can breathe, or eyes can see,
So long lives this, and this gives life to thee.

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I need some love poems

As it said in title
I need some love poems or love words
thank you

 

I get along without you very well

It is a song by Hoagy Carmichael about lost love, but still a poem of love

 

I get along without you very well
Of course, I do
Except when soft rains fall
And drip from leaves
Then I recall
The thrill of being sheltered in your arms
Of course, I do
But I get along without you very well

I've forgotten you just like I should
Of course, I have
Except to hear your name
Or someone's laugh that is the same
But I've forgotten you just like I should

What a guy
What a fool am I
To think my breaking heart
Could kid the moon
What's in store
Should I fall once more
No, it's best that I stick to my tune

I get along without you very well
Of course, I do
Except perhaps in Spring
But I should never think of Spring
For that would surely break my heart in two

What's in store
Should I fall once more
No, it's best that I stick to my tune

I get along without you very well
Of course, I do
Except perhaps in Spring
But I should never think of Spring
For that would surely break my heart in two

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thank you
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I need some love poems

As it said in title
I need some love poems or love words
thank you

 


天上飘着些微云,
地上吹着些微风。
啊!
微风吹动了我的头发,
教我如何不想她?
月光恋爱着海洋,
海洋恋爱着月光。
啊!
这般蜜也似的银夜。
教我如何不想她?
水面落花慢慢流,
水底鱼儿慢慢游。
啊!
燕子你说些话?
教我如何不想她?
枯树在冷风里摇,
野火在暮色中烧。
啊!
西天还有些儿残霞,
教我如何不想她?

 

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