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Delicious lunch!
I had just finished eating lunch; some potatoes, Chinese cabbages, and white radishes. They're all common vegetables, but taste good. I put some hot peppers in them; I like them very much.
Delicious lunch!
I just finished eating lunch. I had some potatoes, Chinese cabbage, and daikon radish. They're all common vegetables, but they taste good. Because I like them very much, I added some hot peppers.
Hi Oye, finished is already past tense. When you add "had" it sounds like you're going to say something like: "I had just finished eating lunch when the telephone rang."
Also, "white radish" - you're talking about the regular, long, white, lubuo, right? This is called daikon radish in the US.
I hope this is helpful, I also made sentence changes to make your notebook entry sound natural.
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