The Importance of English

I'm a recent graduate in engineering. I've been working only for a year and one of the most important things that I've learned is that if you want to develop yourself in the technology industry in any country, you need to have an advanced level of English fluency, even moreso than the technical skills.

Without a doubt, English opens doors and I'm therefore on the path to improvement.

Thank you for you corrections.

English importance (The importance of English)

I'm a recent graduate in engineering, and I've been working just for a year.  and One of the most important things than I've learned is that if you want to develop yourself in the tecnology industry in any country, you need to have an advanced level of English skills, even more so important than the technical skills.

Without a doubt English opens doors, and I'm on the way to learning this language.

Thank you for you corrections.

Nicely done.  I made a few small changes and suggestions.