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The importance of having the willigness to change things Many often I hear my friends say 'It's not use us getting upset with the situation of the country.We are too young to do anything'.And maybe,they are right. But then,what are we supposed to do? To cross our arms and just watch how everything goes to the dogs? It is truth that we are very young.But precisely because of that,we should at least have rebel spirits. If we,who are young and have the necessary strenght and willigness to change things,to change the future,who is going to do it?

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     I often hear my friends say "It's no use getting upset with the situation of the country. We are too young to do anything," and maybe they are right. But then, what are we supposed to do? Cross our arms and just watch everything go to the dogs? It is true that we are very young, but this is precisely the reason  that we should have rebellious spirits. If we who have the youth, strength and willingness necessary to change the future do not; who is going to do it? 

     Esta es la escritura fina. Unos errores gramaticales, sino una pieza poética e inspiradora.

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I have heard this "sweet talk" many times. "Let's change things!", "Let's do this and that for a better future!" and so on. And what happend? Nothing. Those people just talk the talk, walk the walk. If someone really wants to change something, he/she works on it because he/she does not see any other way or he/she cannot sleep because of the problem. Do you REALLY want to change anything? Or you are just like other people who basically say "it would be nice to...", but they actually do nothing else. Just talking about that.
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The importance of having the willigness to change things

Many o Often I hear my friends say 'It's there's not use us getting upset with the countrys situationsituation of the country.We are too young to do anything'.And maybe,they are right.

But then,what are we supposed to do? To crCross our arms and just watch how everything goes to the dogs?

It is true th that we are very young, but precisely because of that,we should at least have rebel spirits.

If we, who are young and have the necessary strength strenght and willigness to change things,to change the future,who is going to do it?  << This bit its not clear.  Are you trying to say us young people have the willingness and strength to change the future and if we dont who is going to do it?

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