Diary

Well, this weekend was busy, On Friday, I went to work as a volunteer, it was going to be an interesiting interesting Halloween. The team of volunteers worked hard to make the dinner for about three hundred and fity people, but, at the same time, we spend spent our time talking about many thigs things, and joke joking, and laughs laughing... Its It's the best group!!
On Saturday, I went to the supermarket, and earlear earlier in the afternoon, part of my family went to brough bring flowers at to my father's grave. He past passed away twenty one years ago. Later, I went to the cinema with my friends and we ate out .We saw “Gone Girl”, the last latest movie of by David Fincher. I liked the film, which tells abot of the relationship of a couple that didn't want to stay toguether together after five years of marriage, but, they stayed together for many reasons, such as money, routine, … until one day, the wife was gone...and the secrets was releved were and their lifes lives weren't what they seemed... I´m not telling the end.
On Sunday, I stayed home all day. In the afternnon, I was reading read news about new Damien Rice's album, and listened listened to a few songs online.

Excellently written! It's cool that they show American movies in Italy. You used a very complex structure here, and don't worry too much about my corrections. You did a great job, so keep it up!

Diary

Well, this weekend was busy, on Friday, I went to work as a volunteer, it was an interesiting Halloween. The team of volunteers worked hard to make the dinner for about three hundred and fifty people, but at the same time, we spend our time talking about many things, and jokes, and we laugh a lot ( it's better to say " we had a lot of fun together)... It's the best group!!
On Saturday, I went to the supermarket, and earlier in the afternoon, part of my family went to brought flowers on my father's grave.He past away twenty one years ago. Later, I went to the cinema with my friends and we ate out.We saw “Gone Girl”, the last movie of David Fincher. I like the film. It tells about the relationship beetwin a couple,that after five years of marriage don't want to stay together anymore, but they still do for many reason, as money and routine until one day, the wife went away ( or passed if you want to say that she died), and the secret was relieved and their lifes weren't what they seemed. I´m not going to tell the end. 

On Sunday, I stay at home all day. In the afternoon, I read news about new Damien Rice's album and I listened few songs online.