Corrections · 2
Hey Nathan!
Megan's corrections are spot on. There's only one very small thing I might add:
I'm actually trying to find others ways to learn English, like watching shows in their original language... it just sounds a little more natural this way.
Your writing is great! :-)
About me
My name is Nathan and I'm living I live in France. I was born in the South of France and I moved to the East when I was 13. Since that then, I didn't move anymore I haven't moved again. I really enjoy reading, especially fantastics, but first most of all, I love watching shows ! I saw have seen a few, like Game of Thrones, Breaking Bad or and The Walking Dead, for the most which are better known. and My favorites are Arrow, Banshee and White Collar.
I also like playing videogames with my friends and spending time on the computer. I'm a lot into computer science a lot. That's the principal reason why I'm trying to improve my English (because it's highly required in this field) but I love this language.
Apart from that, I'm kind of greedy as I can't help eating a lot of pastas ! But next to that, I'm doing workout regulary so that I keep myself in a good health.
That's it for the moment, thanks in advance for these who might correct me, I'm actually trying to find others ways to learn English, as like watching shows in original voice without subtitles or and finding penpals ! Thanks for reading :)
This is really good! Nothing was unclear, and mostly the errors were small ones. Keep it up!
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