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First notebook entry: Introducing myself hi,everybody~~My name is Ross.I'm Chinese,from a butiful city-Suzhou. I'm new here.I wish to make friends with all of you,if you want to learn Chinese,I'm be glad to help you.And I'm poor in English,can you help me?TKs a lot. Best wishs. :)

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

hi,everybody~~My name is Ross.I'm Chinese,from a beautiful city-Suzhou.
I'm new here.I wish to make friends with all of you,if you want to learn Chinese,I'm I'll be glad to help you.And I'm poor in bad at English,can you help me?TKs Thnx a lot.
Best wishes. :)
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself                    Come on! Agood beginning is half a sucess.

Hi,everybody~~My name is Ross.I'm a Chinese,from a butiful  beautifulcity-Suzhou.
I'm new here.I wish to make friends with all of you.If you want to learn Chinese,I'm be glad to help you while  I'm poor in English,can you help me?TKs a lot.
Best wishs. :)


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