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Advantages of going to the university in the evenings It was long time ago when I used to go to the university in the mornings. I remember that I pick that option because it was the normal option. Everyone who ended the high school and get into the university liked to keep the old habits which imply wake up very early. Perharps we were affraid to try the new possibilities. Nevertheless, it doesn't take me too long to realize that I could have a better life just changing my timetable. And then, in the second year of my stay in the university, I made a decision that would change my live forever: go in evenings. I hadn't to wake up early because of obligation anymore, I only got up early if it was my choose. I hadn't to have my breakfast fast and in bad manner anymore because now I was plenty of time for that. When I had my classes finished I could go with my classmates to take something instead to come back home because I was starving. And last but not least, people are friendlier when they have slept well!

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The advantages of going to the university in the evenings


It was a long time ago that I used to go to the university in the mornings. I remember that I picked/chose that option because it was the normal option. Everyone who ended the finished high school and got into the university liked to keep the old habits, which imply wake included waking up very early. Perharps we were afraid to try the new possibilities. 


Nevertheless, it doesn't didn't (pasado) take me too long to realize that I could have a better life just by changing my timetable. And then, in the second year of my stay in the university, I made a decision that would change my live forever: go in the evenings.

I hadn't didn't have to wake up early because of obligation anymore; I only got up early if it was my choice. I hadn't didn't have to have my breakfast fast and in bad manner anymore because now I there was plenty of time for that. When I had my classes finished my clases, I could go with my classmates to take eat something instead to come of coming back home because I was starving. And last but not least, people are friendlier when they have slept well!

 

Good job, as usual.

Note:  I did not have to ..., or I didn't have to

... instead of ...

EJ:  Instead of reading the novel, I watched the movie.


 

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Advantages of going to the university in the evenings.

 

It was a long time ago that I used to go to college in the mornings. I remember that I picked that option because it was the normal thing to do. Everyone who graduated and went to university liked to keep the old habits and continue to wake up very early. Perharps we were afraid to try the new possibilities.

Nevertheless, it didn't take me too long to realize that I could have a better life by just changing my timetable. And then, in the second year of my stay at the university, I made a decision that would change my live forever: to attend in the evenings.

I did not have to wake up early because of obligation anymore, I only had to get up early if I wanted to. I didn't have to eat my breakfast quickly and in a bad mood anymore, because now I had plenty of time for that. When I finished my classes I could go with my classmates and hang out instead to coming back home because I was starving. And last but not least, people are friendlier when they have slept well!

 

** In the U.S. we refer to "university" as "college"

** Great use of "nevertheless" and the correct form of "too"

 

I agree with all of this. I HATE mornings. Everything is better in the evening. 

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Advantages of going to the university in the evenings

It was a long time ago when I used to go to the university in the mornings. I remember  picking that option because everybody was doing the same. Everyone who finished ended the high school and got into the university and liked to keep the old habits which implied waking up very early. Perhaps we were afraid to try the new possibilities.

Nevertheless, it didn't take me too long to realize that I could have a better life just by changing my timetable. And then, in the second year of my stay in the university, I made a decision that would change my live forever: going to the university in the evenings.

I hadn't to didn't wake up early because of any obligation anymore, I only got up early since it was my choice. At breakfast, I didn't gobble my food I hadn't to have my breakfast fast and in bad manner anymore because now I had plenty of time for that. After my classes, I could go with my classmates to take something instead of coming back home because I was starving. And last but not least, people are friendlier when they have slept well!

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