english

I'm seeking to improve my English for professional reasons and for personal interest (since i adore some kind of British music)

english

I'm seeking to improve my English for professional reasons and also for personal interest (since i adore some kind of British music)

english

I'm seeking to improve my English aiming at getting to more work possibilities. Furthermore for personal ineterest.

english

I'm seeking to improve my English for professional reasons as well as for personal interest (since i adore some kind of British music).

english

I'm seeking to improve my English with an aim of aiming at getting to more work possibilities. Furthermore, I'm learning out of for personal ineterest.

Just a few changes for improved flow and complete sentences. A final version without bold/strikethrough would look like this: 

I'm seeking to improve my English with an aim of getting more work possibilities. Furthermore, I'm learning out of personal interest.

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