To begin with; it wasn't Aerial Dance. It was actually Aerial Yoga. A lot of breathing and stretching. My body hurts. I found the "yoga part" a little bit boring, but I loved the part that when we were hanging from the fabric supports. The truth is that I am not considering of going again, because everything it was moving too slow for my taste. I am now thinking of trying something different. Pole dancing or just traditional dancing. I'll think about it. 

    Effie, 
Firstly, your use of punctuation; there is no need to use exclamation points. They are useful with dialogue, but consider limiting their use in narrative writing. They do not add value to the meaning. Commas are useful in a sentence when the object or subject is not changing, but the description is: "boring, but I loved the part . . ." Secondly, adverbs such as "of," "actually," and "now" are excessive information for the reader, because we understand the time of the event, and that it did happen; such as "it was actually yoga" and "I am now thinking." Good job. 

AERIAL DANCE pt. 2 (impressions)

(Corrections???)

I said that my next "notebook entry" will be my impressions about aerial dance, so here we go:

Hmm...
To begin with, it wasn't Aerial DANCE. It was actually Aerial YOGA. A loooot of breathing and stretching! My body hurts -.- ( :P ).

I found the "yoga part" a little bit boring but I loved the part when we were hanging from the fabric!
The truth is that I am not considering of going again because everything moved too slow for my taste! I am now thinking of trying something different. Pole dancing or just dancing! I'll think about it!

(I uploaded a photo from the lesson)