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my day today is thursday。tomorrow is weekend。I finally can go home。have a good rest。on saturday someone friends play football,then have dinner ,chat in everying together。they are my best friends。every time I meet they all very happy。I can‘t wait 。write a composition in English is very difficult for me。come on 。

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My Day

Today is Thursday, tomorrow is the weekend and I can finally can go home and have a good rest.。On Saturday someone friends and I will play football,then have dinner ,and chat in everying about things together. They are my best friends, and every time I meet see them they're all very happy, so。I can‘t wait! Writing a composition in English is very difficult for me.。Come on. 

 

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Hi there! Instead of making small corrections to each component, I will instead write your paragraph as I would have. I hope you can identify the differences and I hope it helps!

"Today is Thursday, and tomorrow is the weekend. Finally I can go home and rest. On Saturday some friends and I will play football and then have dinner, chatting about everything together. They are my best friends. Every time we meet we are all very happy - I can't wait! Writing a composition in English is very difficult for me. "

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