check out my first English poem
In the alley of my mind
I stare the warmness of your hand
I throw the rotten food left in the kitchen
Next Friday the agony will come to an end
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Cool! You are brave to attempt poetry in your second language. Because poetry can be both strict and loose in it's grammar, it will be hard for anyone to "correct" your poems. Not a very valuable exercise for grammar, but a great exercise for self expression. Write more poems! I'd love to read them! :)
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