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Hypertension, Fat and Carbohidrates. Mexico and United States are countries with a lot of people with hypertension. I don't know about the situtation in another countries, but I believe that it can same or similar. Hearts problems is a characteristic of occidental life. Food fast, sedentary, and stress life. In Mexico too many persons have hypertension-relationated clinical characteristics. High cholesterol and tryglicerides level. When the physician tells them that they need change their food dietary. Too many persons only leave fat foods but not carbohidrates, It's incorrect. The body is a machinary that always searchs beneficts for us. When we have to eaten too much carbohidrates. The body transforms carbohidrates in fat. A vicious circle for people with hypertension problems. Gracias por leerme. Saludos

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Hypertension, Fat and Carbohidrates.

 

Mexico and United States are countries with in which a lot of people with have hypertension. I don't know about the situtation in another other countries, but I believe that it can may be the same or similar. Heart problems is a are characteristic of occidental life the lifestyle in Western world: fast food, sedentary jobs, and a stressful life.


In Mexico too many persons have hypertension-related clinical characteristics, that is, high levels of cholesterol and tryglicerides. When the physician tells them that they need change their food dietary habits, too many persons (people) only leave avoid fat foods but not carbohidrates, which is incorrect.
The body is a machine that always searchs seeks benefits for us. When we have to eaten too much many carbohidrates, the body transforms carbohidrates into fat.  This is a vicious circle for people with hypertension problems.

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

 

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Hypertension, Fat and Carbohydrates.

Mexico and the United States are countries that have a lot of people with hypertension. I don't know about the situtation in other countries, but I believe that it is the same or similar. Heart problems are a characteristic of a sedentary life filled with fast food and stress. 
In Mexico too many people have hypertension-related clinical characteristics, such as high cholesterol and trygliceride levels. When the physician tells them that they need to change their food diet, too many people only stop eating fatty foods but not carbohydrates. This is incorrect.
The body is a machine that always searches for benefits for us. When we have eaten too many carbohydrates, the body transforms carbohydrates into fat. This is a vicious circle for people with hypertension problems.

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

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Hypertension, Fat and Carbohidrates Carbohydrates.

Mexico and United States are countries with a lot of people with hypertension. I don't know about the situtation in another countries, but I believe that it can it is probably the same or similar. Hearts problems is are a characteristic of occidental (you can also say Western but occidental is correct as well in a more professional article such as this) life due to fast food, . Food fast, sedentary lifestyle, and stress life.
In Mexico too many persons people have hypertension-relationated related clinical diagnoses characteristics. High including high cholesterol and tryglicerides tryglyceride levels. When the physician tells them that they need to change their diet too food dietary. Too many persons people only leave fat give up fatty foods but not carbohidrates, It's carbohydrates which is incorrect.
The body is a machinary machine that always searchs out benefits beneficts for us. When we have to eaten too much carbohidrates. The many carbohydrates the body transforms the carbohydrates into  carbohidrates in fat. A which becomes a vicious circle for people with hypertension problems.

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

 

This was taking on a big project with some advanced medical terms. I know these terms and how they are used but other English speakers might not unless they have some medical background. Hydrate is a fancy word for adding in water and carbo has to do with carbon so carbohydrate comes from the root words meaning to add moisture to carbon structures which is exactly what carbohydrates do in the body so that might help you to remember how to spell that word in the future.


You did a GREAT JOB!  

 

 

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Hypertension, Fat and Carbohidrates.

Mexico and United States are countries with a lot of people with hypertension. I don't know about the situtation in another countries, but I believe that it can be the same or similar. Hearts problems is a characteristic of occidental life. Food fast, sedentary, and stress life.
In Mexico too many persons has hypertension-relationated clinical characteristics. High cholesterol and tryglicerides level. When the physician tells them that they need change their food dietary. Too many persons only leave fat foods but not carbohidrates, It's incorrect.
The body is a machinary that always searchs beneficts for us. When we have to eaten too much carbohidrates. The body transforms carbohidrates in fat. A vicious circle for people with hypertension problems.

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos

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Thanks Dorothy, I hope don't forget it. Muchas gracias de nuevo por los consejos.

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