Family

I was born into a poor family. Another way to say it is I was born with a wooden spoon in my mouth. My parents are peasants and they can't earn much money whatever how however hard-working they are. I had an elder sister(Had or have? If she's still living, use have), so I born was my birth violated the China's family planning policy. My parents need had to give the government the whole family income for 4 years whole family incoming.
My parents worked very hard to let me go to school to study. Even They even needed to borrowed money from others. I was graduated from university in 2004 and became a telecommunicatons engineer. With my hard working I made my family's lives better and I bought department an apartment at in the city and  bought a car. I got married in 2009 and had a daughter in 2012. Now my daughter is 2 years old and she is very lovely, smart and lively.
I love my family and I'll continue to work hard to make my family's lives better, to make my daughter's life happy.

Family

I was born in a poor family. Another way to say, I was born with a wood spoon in my mouth. My parents are peasants and they cann't (or "cannot") earn more money whatever how hard working they are. I had an elder sister. So I was born was violated the China's family planning policy.My parents need givinged the government for 4 years whole family's incomeing.
My parents work very hard to let me go to school study.Even they needed to borrowed money from others. I was graduated from university at 2004 and became a telecommunicaton engineer.With my hard working I made my family's life better and I bought department at city (What do you mean?) ,bought a car.I got married in 2009 and had daughter in 2012.Now, my daughter is 2 years old and she is very lovely,smart and lively.
I love my family and I'll continue to work hard that to make my family's life better, to make my daughter living happy.

Good luck, frankie zheng!