My hobbies

I am writing to improve and I will talk about my hobbies.

My hobbies are listening to music, going out with friends, sports and in winter, skiing.

Skiing is my passion, I love it!

I am open to talk to improve!!

Hi, the word progress in english is not really used for saying that you want to become better at something, for that normally the word improve is used instead. I hope this helps.

My hobbies

Then, I write for progress and I will talk of my hobbies.
My hobbies are music, go going with my friends, sport and in winter, the skiing.
The skiing Skiing is my passion, I love it!
And I am open for talk for progress !!

Hi Maylen, skiing is a general word, so it doesnt need (the) for specification.

My hobbies

I am writing for practice and I will talk about my hobbies.
My hobbies are music, going out with my friends, sport and in winter, the skiing.
The Skiing is my passion; I love it!
And I am open to talking for practice !!

Just a few corrections for you. You can use the word 'progress', but I would write it as 'I am writing to make progress with my English".  " I am open to talking so my English can progress".  

Jacqueline

My hobbies

Then, I'll write for making progress and I will talk of my hobbies.
My hobbies are music, go hang out with my friends, sports and in winter, the skiing.
The Skiing is my passion, I love it!
And I am open for talk for doing more progress !!

Je voudrais pratiquer mon Français avec toi, ajoute-mois sur ton skype: dmartinezmurguia