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Business English Writing-- Enquire Business English Writing-- Enquire Write your letter to Rosemary Brown at Waterside Industrial Park: • - asking about which other firms are also there • - asking about the size of the units • - asking about the financial supports from them • - asking for an information pack Dear Rosemary Brown, We are writing in connection with your Waterside Industrial Park details. Our company is expanding rapidly and is looking for new premises. Therefore, we would like to know which other firms are also there, for example: upper suppliers and lower suppliers, besides, all kind of sizes of the units are provided. With reference to financial support, we would be grateful if you could tell us how to apply it. At the same time, we hope you send some information packs to us, our address is XXXXXXXX. If you have any further information, please feel free to keep us updated. We are looking forward to your cooperation. Thank you Best wishes, Xxxxx

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Dear Ms. Brown,
We are writing to request details in connection with Waterside Industrial Park.
Our company is expanding rapidly and is looking for new space. Waterside Industrial Park has been brought to our attention as a possible location for expansion. To that end, I would very much appreciate if you would answer the following questions:

What are the types and sizes of units available?

What other firms are also located at Waterside Industrial Park?

What financial incentives are available to our company for relocating to Waterside Industrial Park?

Finally, please send us an information pack on your company and Waterside Industrial Park, our address is XXXXXXXX.

Thank you very much for your time.

Regards,
Xxxxx

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