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My favorite star My favorite star is Jason Zhang.He is a singer.His songs are all very pleasant to hear.I have already liked him for six years.He is very handsome,and he is a gentleman.Recently,he is busy for his tour ceoncert.Last Saturday,he came to Hangzhou,Hangzhou was his second place.And I went to his concert,I was so excited to see him.I sang every songs which he sang in the stage.and I took many photoes.That night I couldn't to sleep for a long time.I love him very much.And I will love him forever.

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You need to remember to put a space after full stops, but your English is good. (Example: My favorite star is Jason Zhang. He is a singer.)

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