A perfume that I missed
About one months ago,I went to a shopping mall and saw my favourite perfume Marc Jacobs daisy still available,Because I thought I still have a little daisy then I didn't bought another same one.Now my diasy already used up,but today when I came to the shop again,all of daisies have been sold out.the empty shop window made me a bit down because I am used to wear daisy almost everyday in my life.the fresh smell always give me energy.but the clerk told me she doesn't know when will have daisy in stock.maybe I should choose another perfume?maybe it is also a good perfume for me?
Have you ever missed anything in your life?Daisy will come back one day,but if you missed some thing in your life,will it come back again?I don't want to leave any regrets for myself and hope everyone here the same.
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A perfume that I missed
About one month ago, I went to a shopping mall and saw my favourite perfume, Marc Jacobs Daisy, still available. Because I thought I still had a little daisy, I didn't buy any more. Now my Daisy is all gone, but today when I went to the shop again, it was all sold out. The empty shop window made me feel a bit down because I am used to wearing Daisy almost everyday of my life. That fresh smell always gives me energy. But the clerk told me she doesn't know when they will have daisy in stock again. Maybe I should choose another perfume. Maybe something else would also be a good perfume for me.Have you ever missed anything in your life? Daisy will come back one day, but if you are missing something in your life, will it come back again? I hope to have no regrets and hope everyone here the same.
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In my display, the paragraph formatting seems to have been lost. The last part of my comment, seems to be missing so here it is just in case:
I don't think I will go much into the philosophical side of your essay, but I am sure almost everyone has missed something or someone in their life. Hopefully for most people including you, it's something less important in existence such as perfume rather than a special person. Your attitude is a positive one and I think you must do well to get the best and truest things from life without big regrets. Keep true to your purpose!
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Dear Yin,
As commented already, it is a philosophical essay!!!
I didn't know anything about this perfume (or much about others) and I started asking questions about the fragrance and price range and shops selling it. Then I decided to research it myself. It is sold in The Perfume Shop, Debenhams, Boots, and others. Obviously, you cannot guarantee it being in stock or in every store, but I think you can find it. Otherwise you can buy online. Is it the eau de parfum or eau de toilette you usually use? Have you tried other different kinds of products in the range?
I can begin to imagine the kind of scent it has, but would be interested to smell it for real. I can see why you would like the scent and the style and the presentation of it. It is aimed at young people, it has a fresh and positive fragrance that is somewhat conventional and familiar but has a special and surprising twist, and it is more faithful and honest rather than seductive and sexy.
Yes, I think you could find others similar or maybe even better or... different! Sometimes it's nice to use the same good one, sometimes want to or need to get something just similar, sometimes good to change to a totally different one or different style. Maybe a totally different fragrance and style and feeling would be exciting. I would suggest something with a little spice or deeper and more intense fragrance, but that's not so much an everyday fragrance (more for evenings out I think) and you'll be attracting too many men! Why not go to the perfume shops and test lots of different fragrances? It's nice even just to experience them. Then if you still prefer Daisy, you can still get that somewhere.
I don't think I will go much into the philosophical side of your essay, but I am sure almost everyone has missed something or someone in their life. Hopefully for most people including you, it's something less important in existence such as perfume rather than a special person. Your attitude is a positive one and I think y
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A philosophical essay !
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