Football Game [252]
A football game was held at 7 o’clock last evening. Mr. Lee arrived his home at 7:30 p.m.. As soon as he arrived, he turned on the television and started to watch the game.
Mr Lee’s girlfriend called him several times from 8 o’clock. He could not receive the call because his cellular phone was in his bag. She upset very much, and later they quarreled hammer and tongs.
(This is a liberal translation of a Chinese text from "http://bitex-cn.com/". I did not post the original text, so just correct my English. Thank you in advance.)
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Football Game [252]
A football game was held at 7 o’clock last evening. Mr. Lee arrived his home at 7:30 p.m.. As soon as he arrived, he turned on the television and started to watch the game.
Mr. Lee’s girlfriend called him several times from 8 o’clock. He could not receive the call because his cellular phone was in his bag. She was upset very much ("She was really upset" is what I would say), and later they quarreled hammer and tongs. (This phrase is correct, but I've never heard it. Seems to be something from a Chinese to English dictionary.)
(This is a liberal translation of a Chinese text from "http://bitex-cn.com/". I did not post the original text, so just correct my English. Thank you in advance.)
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