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Could you correct my post, please? Many thanks in advance for your help Hello, my dear friend! How are things going there? What is the weather like? Here it is cold outside and the sky is grey. Today I woke up late with my daughter. We ate musli with milk and drank tea with honey. My daughter needs trainers for her PE lessons in the kindergarten since her old ones are too small foe her now. So we deciced to go to the kids' shop to buy a new pair of trainers. As I have no car we go almost everywhere on foot or by public transport. Since the shop is not far from our house we went there on foot. We went throught the small apple garden. About fifty years ago the area where we live was a villife and the apple trees are a heritage from this villliage. When apples are grtowing and you are walking along this apples the smell is so pleasant. Unfortutanely, we didn't buy new trainers as there were not suitable sizes for my daughter. So we must go to another kids' shop. We came home about an hour ago and after a long walk we are both have a ravebous appetite. For dinner , i have yesterday's buckwheat with olive oil. I must bid you farewell since household chores beckon. Take care and keep in touch, please.

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Could you correct my post, please? Many thanks in advance for your help

 

Hello, my dear friend!
How are things going there? What is the weather like? Here it is cold outside and the sky is grey.
Today I woke up late with my daughter. We ate musli with milk and drank tea with honey.
My daughter needs trainers for her PE lessons in the kindergarten since her old ones are too small for her now.


So we deciced to go to the kids' shop to buy a new pair of trainers. Because I have no car, we almost go almost everywhere by foot or by public transport. Since the shop is not far from our house, we walked there. We went through the small apple garden. About fifty years ago the area where we live was a Village and the apple trees were a heritage from this villliage. When you walk along these apple trees during harvesttime, the smell is so pleasant.


Unfortutanely, we didn't buy new trainers as there were no suitable sizes for my daughter.
So we had to go to another kids' shop.


We came home about an hour ago and after a long walk, we became ravebous appetite. Yesterday we had a buckwheat with olive oil for dinner.


I must bid you farewell since household chores beckon.
Take care and keep in touch, please.

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Could you correct my post, please? Many thanks in advance for your help

Hello, my dear friend!
How are things going there? What is the weather like? Here it is cold outside and the sky is grey.
Today, I woke up late with my daughter. We ate muesli with milk and drank tea with honey.
My daughter needs trainers for her PE lessons in the kindergarten since her old ones are too small [for her] now.
So, we decided to go to the kids' shop to buy a new pair of trainers. As I have no car we go almost everywhere on foot or by public transport. Since the shop is not far from our house, we walked [there] on foot. We went throught a small apple orchard. About fifty years ago the area where we live was a village and the apple trees are a heritage from this villliage. When the apples are grtowing and you are walking between the trees, the smell is so pleasant.
Unfortunately, we didn't buy any new trainers as there were not suitable sizes for my daughter.
[So], we will have to go to another kids' shop.
We came home about an hour ago and after a long walk we are both have a ravenous appetite. For dinner, I have yesterday's buckwheat with olive oil.
I must bid you farewell, since household chores beckon.
Take care and keep in touch, please.

 

The words in square brackets [ ] are optional - removing them will not change the meaning of the sentences.  You've made good use of some advanced grammar in this piece. Well done.

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nice essay, well done.

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