When I was...
When I was running down in the hill, I saw the moon beyond the horizon reflecting its light over the sea like a bridge between us and saw my freedom but it was a lie because I just found my end drowned in your spit...
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When I was...
When I was running down in the hill, I saw the moon beyond the horizon, reflecting its light over the sea like a bridge between us, and I saw my freedom; but it was a lie because I just found my end drowned (¿ immersed ?) in your spit...
Does 'us' refer to you and the moon, or to you and another person?
If it's 'you and the moon', then 'us' sounds okay.
If it's 'you and another person', 'you and me' would sound better.
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Hahahaha i found this funny for some reason.
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When I Was...
When I was running down in the hill, I saw the moon beyond the horizon reflecting its light over the sea like a bridge between us and I saw my freedom but it was a lie because I just found my end drowned in your spit...
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