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Russia flagOleg Stepo
Evening Run There was a couple, a man and a woman, at one of the benches in the park. They had a bottle of vodka and some food. They were sitting and resting at that moment when I was running past them. There were few people in the park because of rather wet and cold weather, so they put their mind to me. When I came alongside of them the man shouted out, “Hey, are you a boxer or a runner?” I ignored her question and went on my way. As they seemed I disrespected them. I came up them in several minutes again. Man’s curiosity didn’t disappear at all. At that moment, when I was passing them the second time, the man jumped up and tried to chase me with stumbling strides. He asked me again, “Dude, don’t you hear me? Are you a boxer or just a runner?” He didn’t offer me other options and, had accelerated a bit, I ran away from them. He stopped, turned around and made the following conclusion, “He is a runner. Look up, he ran away. If he were a boxer he punched me”

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Evening Run

There was a couple, a man and a woman, at on one of the benches in the park. They had a bottle of vodka and some food. They were sitting and resting at that moment when as I was running past them. There were few people in the park because of the  rather wet and cold weather, so they put their mind to me. When I came alongside of them the man shouted out, “Hey, are you a boxer or a runner?” I ignored her his question and went on my way. As they seemed I had been rude to  disrespected them. I came upon them in several minutes later again. The man was still curious.Man’s curiosity didn’t disappear at all. At that moment, when As I was passing them the second time, the man jumped up and tried to chase me with stumbling strides. He asked me again, “Dude, didn't don’t you hear me? Are you a boxer or just a runner?” He didn’t offer me any other options and, had I accelerated a bit, I ran away from them. He stopped, turned around and made the following remark conclusion, “He is a runner. Look up, he ran away. If he were a boxer he would've punched me”

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Evening Run

There was a couple, a man and a woman, at one of the benches in the park. They had a bottle of vodka and some food. They were sitting and resting at that moment when I was running past them. There were few people in the park because of rather wet and cold weather, so they put their mind to me. When I came alongside them, the man shouted out, “Hey, are you a boxer or a runner?” I ignored his question and went on my way. They seemed like I'd disrespected them. I came up to them again several minutes later. The man’s curiosity didn’t disappear at all. At that moment, when I was passing them the second time, the man jumped up and tried to chase me with stumbling strides. He asked me again, “Dude, don’t you hear me? Are you a boxer or just a runner?” He didn’t offer me other options and, after accelerating a bit, I ran away from them. He stopped, turned around and made the following conclusion, “He is a runner. Look, he ran away. If he were a boxer he'd punch me”

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