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Please correct my sentences. (11) 1 - I was studying in the library while a group of students offered me to join them to study together. I accepted their offer and joined them. We are studying maths now. It's really strange how much we became close in this short time. I think I have intimate terms with them and probably we would be close friends. 2 - I am planning to spend the night in the other hotel. I know that it's not a five star one like the hotel in the center of the city, but it's a really cosy and intimate place. I always feel relaxing there. 3 - The captain has intimated that we would change our playing strategy, but we still play with the same strategy in spite of our bad results lately. 4 - The school has intimated that any student doesn't pay the school fees to the end of the next month will be prevented from entering the final exams. Please correct my sentences, or give me a better suggestion to express their meanings in your native way. Please can you indicate the distinction between a correction and the suggestion. Thanks.

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Please correct my sentences. (11)

1 - I was studying in the library while a group of students offered me to join them. I accepted their offer and joined them. We are studying math now. It's really strange how close we became in this short time. I think I have intimate terms with them and we'd probably be close friends.

2 - I am planning to spend the night in the other hotel. I know that it's not a five star one like the hotel in the center of the city, but it's a really cozy and intimate place. I always feel relaxed there.

3 - The captain has intimated that we would change our playing strategy, but we still play with the same strategy in spite of our bad results lately.

4 - The school has intimated that any student who doesn't pay the school fees by the end of the next month will be prevented from entering the final exams.

Please correct my sentences,
or give me a better suggestion to express their meanings in your native way.
Please indicate the distinction between a correction and the suggestion.

Thanks.

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