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Please correct my mistakes if possible. To Build a Statue to Honor a Famous Person. I like they built a statue a scientific person just like Dr. Holakuee. I like his personality because he has an affective personality on people. He is realistic and can help people when are confuse. He is a sociologist, economist and psychologist. He is a smart man and can analyses rationally issues. He really is a helpful scientist. He has a critical thinking. He has lived in USA since 36 years ago. Anyone can correct me. I will be so grateful.

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Please correct my mistakes if possible. To Build a Statue to Honor a Famous Person.

 

I like they built a statue a scientific person just like Dr. Holakuee.

 

I would like if they built a statue in honor of a scientist, like Dr. Holakuee.  


I like his personality because he has an affective personality on people. (Describe an affective personality. Do you mean contagious? Is it positive? Is it conducive to learning?)

I like him because he has a positive influence on people. <or>

I like his personality because it has a positive influence on people.


He is realistic and can help people when they are confused. He is a sociologist, economist and psychologist. He is a smart man and can rationally analyze issues. (good job here)

 

He really is a helpful scientist. He has a critical thinking. He has lived in USA since 36 years ago.
Anyone can correct me. I will be so grateful.

 

He is a really helpful scientist who practices critical thinking. He has lived in the U.S. for 36 years. 

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(Please correct my mistakes if possible)

Building A Statue To Honour A Famous Person

I'm glad they built a statue of an academic like Dr. Holakuee. I like him as a person because his personality has a strong effect on people. He is pragmatic and can help people when they don't understand something. He is a sociologist, economist and psychologist. He is a smart man who can analyse a problem rationally. He is a really helpful scientist. He thinks critically. He has lived in the USA for 36 years. 

If anyone can correct my entry, I will be so grateful.

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