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join in the italki 's fist day hello,everybody,today,I join in the italki,I want to learn more language in italki , I come from the China, I can speak the Mandarin and Cantonese. who want to learn the Chinese friends can find me ,and we can make Pen pal .

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Hello, everybody. Today I have joined (It's better using Present Perfect because is' the past action) in the italki. I want to learn more languages on italki. I am came from the China (we don't use 'the' with countries, exception The USA, The Russian Federation etc), I can speak the Mandarin and Cantonese. Who wants to learn the Chinese with me, friends you can find me, and we can make Pen pal .

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join in the italki 's first day

hello,everybody,today,I join in the italki,I want to learn more in language in italki(or,you can say "here" , I come from the China, I can speak the Mandarin and Cantonese. who want to learn the Chinese friends can find me ,(if you want to learn Chinese,please feel freely to chat with me),and we can make Pen pal with each other.


I'm not a English native speaker though, I can correct some basci mistakes you have made. Hope it will be better than before,and welcome more native speakers to correct the two versions :)

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You are welcome! I hope that you can achieve your aspires.

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