Albania

Albania is the most beautiful place in the world. It's a small place but very beautiful. The beaches of Albania are wonderful but the people are what I adore the most. They are friendly and simple; they dont judge each other based on color, clothing, their money...etc. I think Albania is amazing.

Albania
Albania is the most beautiful place in the world for me. It’s a small place but very beautiful. The beaches of Albania are wonderful, but the thing that I adore the most is the people. They are very friendly and simple(??). They don’t judge each other for their color, their dresses (the way they dress), their money etc
I think Albania is just amazing.

I wuld change the word simple. Maybe to "and they live a simple lifestyle". Also "the way they dress" is much more natural but "their dresses" is grammatically correct :)

Good job! Mostly don't forget to capitalize countries, the pronoun "I" at all times, and the beginning of a sentence.