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A cold morning In China. It's autumn now. Today is sunny but a little cold I woke up so early. After breakfast, I learned 145 English words. But I don't think my English has been improved. Maybe I have a long way to go. It's just a beginning, Be patience.. I wanna talk about one of my experience. When I was a child. I had a dog. I love it so much though it has bitten me. Until now my hand have a scar. It was alreally dead. But I miss him so much. Though sometimes we would be hurted by somebody who we love so much, it's hurtful. After he/she passed away. the scar is a memory. Forgive everything but a heart thinking of him/her.

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A Cold Morning

In China. It's autumn in China now. Today is sunny but a little cold, I woke up so early. After breakfast, I learned 145 English words. But I don't think my English has been improved. Maybe I have a long way to go. It's just a beginning, I must be patient .
I wanna want to write talk about an one of my experience I had. When I was a child. I had a dog. I loved it so much even though it bit has bitten me. I still have the scar. Until now my hand have a scar. It died a long time ago,  was alreally dead. but I miss him so much.
Though sometimes we would be hurted by somebody who we love so much, it's hurtful. After he/she passed away. the scar is a memory. Forgive everything but a heart thinking of him/her.

Sometimes we are hurt by someone whom we love very much, and the scar remains even after they have gone.  It is best to forgive them and to remember them fondly.

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A cold morning

In China. It's autumn now. Today is sunny but a little cold. I woke up so early. After breakfast, I learned 145 English words. But I don't think my English has been improved. Maybe I have a long way to go. It's just a beginning, be patient..
I wanna talk about one of my experiences. When I was a child, I had a dog. I love it so much though it has bitten me. Until now my hand has a scar. It was alreally dead. But I miss him so much.
Though sometimes we will be hurt by somebody who we love so much, it's hurtful. After he/she passed away, the scar is a memory. Forgive everything but a heart thinking of him/her.

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A cold morning

In China. It's autumn now. Today is sunny but a little cold I woke up so early. I learnt 145 English worlds, after my breakfazt. But I don't think my English has been improved. Maybe I have a long way to go. It's just a beginning, and i must have  patience..
I wanna talk about one of my experience. When I was a child. I had a dog. I love it so much though it has bitten me. Until now, my hand has a scar. It was alreally dead. But I miss him so much.
Though sometimes, we would be hurted by somebody who we love so much, it's hurtful. After he/she passed away. the scar is a memory. We forgive everything but heart still thinking about  him/her.

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good luck, I think all language learners should be strong at learning and practicing. :)
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A cold morning

In China, it's autumn now. Today is sunny but also a little cold. I woke up so early! After breakfast I learned 145 English words but I don't think my English has been improved. Maybe I have a long way to go. It's just the beginning, I must have patience..
I wanna talk about one of my experiences. When I was a child, I had a dog and I love it so much though it had bitten me. My hand still has a scar. Although he is dead, I miss him so much.
Though sometimes we are hurt by people whom we love so much, it's still hurtful, even after they have passed away. The scar is a memory. I forgive everything but my heart is thinking of him/her.

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