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My travel to San Luis Potosí Two months ago, I travel to San Luis Potosí. It´s a place so wonderful here in México because there are so many thing to do; extreme activities for example. The dishes in that place are very delicious and are cheaper too! I was in a different place each day but in some of that places, was imposibble stay for the rain. Wherever, that was a great travel... and may be I will return the next year. Gracias por leerme. ¡Saludos!

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My trip to San Luis Potosí

Two months ago, I travelled/traveled (simple past because specific time in past) to San Luis Potosí. It´s a really wonderful place (adjective before noun) so wonderful here in México because there are so many things to do; extreme activities, for example.
The dishes in that place are very delicious and are cheaper too! (use "cheaper" for comparisons)
I was in a different place each day but in some of those places, it was imposibble stay because of the rain.
In any case, it was a great trip ... and maybe I will return the next year.

Gracias por leerme. ¡Saludos!

I put the UK and US spellings of "travelled".  

You would probably say the "the food is" rather than "the dishes are"

Well done! Michael

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It´s a beautiful place and there are many activities to do and places to see... so really you must come to visit San Luis Potosí. Thanks for reading! Greetings!
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San Luis Potosi sounds like an interesting place! I read about it on Wikipedia and the climate appears to be very comfortable. I would like to travel there one day.

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