Living in The Different Place
I've just entered the college in Seprember this year.It's the first time I left my hometown and went another place .
Now I'm living in shanghai .this place also called "魔都“. All kinds of people lives there.I never see so many foreigners.black and white.diferent person from the diferent country.so many tall buildings and originality exhibition.i'have to say ,"Shanghai is a beautiful place to live."
I study in the China Acedamy of Art. Our school is very small but complete.There is a word I think can be discribe it is"cute".I haven't get used to there.but I wanna have a try.
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Living in The Different Place
I've just entered college in Seprember of this year. It's the first time I have left my hometown and went to another place .
Now I'm living in shanghai , this place is also called "魔都“. All kinds of people live here. I have never seen so many foreigners,black , white and so many diferent people from diferent countries. So many tall buildings and originality exhibition. I have to say ,"Shanghai is a beautiful place to live."
I study in the China Acedamy of Art. Our school is very small but complete.There is a word I think can be discribe it is"cute".I haven't get used to there.but I wanna have a try.
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Thank you.^^.I was in a mess when I wrote them.Is these sentense right?
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My correction isnt complete but that is what i fixed for you. I am not sure how i should fix the last part yet.
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