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What's the real glory ? We can't choose our features , our races , and our class social : God creative some people with pretty much of beauty, But on the contrary of other people he creative them ugly ! Some people born in a good family and he inherit money plus good reputation but they are who haven't a good family and a good reputation . No glory to them , and else no guilt for them . No glory in these easy things which we found it when we are born , the glory be in these things which we are creative later during our lives . And we can't found a real beauty in our faces which we haven't choice about it but the real beauty exist in inside us in our actions our words . Don't judge me according my color , my gender , my race , my religion, my family which I belong to : Because all of these things I have nothing to do with it , I born and I founded it my identity. You can only judge me by my moral and my way when I deal with people . No glory to me of these things you owned ! And no guilt to them of these things they don't have ! The glory for who maintains his/her freedom , and dealing with people as humans not for color .. Etc . In the last , the real glory not what you got from your parents or grandparents, It's what you do and what your kids and grandkids will know about you .. Thank you for reading :)

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What's the real glory ? OR Where's the real glory? 

We can't choose our features , races , and/or our social classes. 
God created some people with much physical beauty. On the other hand, he made some people ugly. (or unattractive is a bit nicer, but not as strong)
Some people are born into a good family and they (referring to people)  inherit money and a good reputation, but they are the ones who dont have a good family and reputation .
There is little glory and remorse for such people. 
There is no glory in these easy things which we find when we are born. Glory rests/develops in the things we create later in life.
And we can't find real beauty in our faces which we didn't choose. The real beauty exist inside us; in our actions and our words .
Don't judge me according my color, gender, race, religion, and the family which I belong to. 
I have nothing to do with all these things. I was simply born, and then created my identity. You can only judge me by my morals and the way I deal with people .
To me, there is no glory in these things you own(ed), 
And no guilt towards those who these things do not possess! 


Glory is bestowed upon those who maintain their freedom , and deal with people as humans beings should, regardless of our differences. 


In conclusion, real glory is not what you got from your parents or grandparents.
It's what you do and what your kids and grandkids will know about you ..

 

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Thank you for reading :)

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You right , who has both of them I think they are very few , isn't ?
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Well, I guess you are missing one group. some are beautiful both in face and heart :)
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And I agree with u 100% :)
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After that I wrote :" And we can't found a real beauty in our faces which we haven't choice about it but the real beauty exist in inside us in our actions our words " .

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