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Mexico flagJosé Alberto
The ebola epidemic. The ebola epidemic, don't worry, it's happening in Africa, so far from here. Days after, In Spain, far from here, yet. The week before, in EEUU, the first case in America, what is happening? We underestimate it, we ignore it, there are somethings that we don't understand. The society is interested in other topic, music, movies, actors, cars, somethings more close to us. Also, the governments failed (fallar, is it correct?), too. Now, a lot of countries have deciced send more money to combat the ebola epidemic in Africa, Why not before? Maybe, because we thought that never would come to America. Gracias por leerme. Saludos jose´

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The ebola epidemic.

The ebola epidemic, don't worry, it's happening in Africa, so far from here. Days after, it is In Spain, yet still far from here. The week before, it is in EEUU, the first case in America, what is happening? We underestimate it, we ignore it, there are something that we don't understand. The society is interested in other topics: music, movies, actors, cars, something more close to us. Also, the governments failed (fallar, is it correct?), too.
Now, a lot of countries have deciced send more money to combat the ebola epidemic in Africa, Why not before? Maybe, because we thought that it never would come to America.

Gracias por leerme.
Saludos
jose´

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The ebola epidemic.

The ebola epidemic, don't worry,Don't worry about the ebola epidemic, it's happening in Africa, so far from here. Days after, later In it appeared/happened in Spain, still far from here, yet. The week before, in EEUU, the USA, the first case arrived/appeared/was diagnosed/was detected  in America, what is happening? We underestimate it, we ignore it, there are somethings  some things that we don't understand. The Society is interested in other topics, music, movies, actors, cars, some things more close closer to us. Also, the governments failed (fallar, is it correct? yes, it is correct and it is a verb!), too.
Now, a lot of countries have deciced decided to send more money to combat the ebola epidemic in Africa, Why not didn't they send money before? Maybe , because we  they thought that ebola never would would never come to America.

Days after, In Spain, far from here, yet. - This sentence needs a verb.

The week before, in EEUU, the first case in America.  - This phrase needs a verb.

Why not before?  - This sentence needs a verb. 

 

Well done Jose'.  Don't forget your verbs!

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