Past Simple

I came to the house that I built.
Two years ago I began a new life. I became a new person. Yes, I did it.
Yesterday I chose A new car, bought it and the I broke it.
In ON sunday we were at the house of my friends and I brought a pie to them.
You spoke with my brother and you told him that he is WAS cute.
Mary wore a hat for going to the cinema.
She sat DOWN and wrote how much she HAD spent. Then she thought that she HAD took TAKEN too much money to the market. So she understood her fault.
I stood on IN the City center.

Past Simple

 the use of tense is essentially correct ... but the prepositions and articles!

I came/moved to the house that I had built.
Two years ago I began a new life. I became a new person. Yes, I did it. OK
Yesterday I chose/selected a new car, bought it and then I broke smashed it.
On sunday we were at the my friends' house of my friends and I brought a pie for/to give them.
You spoke with my brother and you told him that he is cute. Good!
Mary wore a hat for going to the cinema. Good
She sat and wrote how much she had spent. Then she thought that she took too much money to the market. So she understood her fault.
I stood on in the city center.